Earworm—two interlocking tanka

told too many times

“be quiet, child, you talk too much—

be seen and not heard”

she finds friends under her bed

who listen in the deep dark

dark has its own voice

a twisted cacophony

of hurt and anger

it plants a vengeful earworm

that screams day and night for blood

©️2023 jai

(Note: Some of you guys may have read this a few days ago. Somehow, I inadvertently moved it to a draft, so am republishing.)

Above Image by Hands off my tags! Michael Gaida from Pixabay

9 thoughts on “Earworm—two interlocking tanka

  1. Jai, I see that you have brought this poem forward again, and it is an absolutely brilliant poem. You are a fantastic poet and you write things that go straight to the heart, please keep writing ❤️

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